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"We Love Shopping at Brent Cross"
"We work with Brent Cross to remind shoppers in North London of what they love about the pioneering shopping mall.
"Situated in one of the world’s most heavily-contested retail catchment areas in the country, Brent Cross is faced with fiercely ambitious competitors, who can outspend them in every area."
"Situated in one of the world’s most heavily-contested retail catchment areas in the country, ..."
Please be kind enough to re-read that. We are right, aren't we? That is gibberish, isn't it? Still, perhaps they haven't started yet. Early draft, and all that business. The jury is out. Will be okay in the end. Let's have another meeting: Shall we take out "world" or "country"? What sounds best?
Link to previous exciting appointment last July.
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